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scared
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:35:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I feel like i've walked a thousand miles
but haven't moved an inch
i keep trying to convince myself
i'll be out of this in a cinch
but its a lie, it always is
i'll never get over him
and i feel as if i'm being used
pretending I'm a gem
i'm scared i'm just an assurance
someone to use as default
and every day I wonder about him
giving all my thought
i love him so much, i really do
but i'm scared he dosen't love me
i'm so confused about this thing
its getting hard to see
my sanity is gone,i'm loosing grip
i can't tell dream from reality
and i'm scared if this doesn't end soon
i'm only going to be a fatality
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Re: scared
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:54:58 PM AEST
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I feel like i've walked a thousand miles
but haven't moved an inch
I've felt this way so many times I can't even keep up with myself. I loved this poem, somehow it accurately reflects most of my feelings. Well done, this is a great write. |
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Re: scared
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 10:11:28 PM AEST
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I loved this...especially the first two lines..... know the feeling....
Jenni |
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Re: scared
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 10:14:59 PM AEST
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| good write =] |
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Re: scared
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 10:42:47 PM AEST
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| very good...I feel what you're writing because I've had the same feeling. You write what I've felt...great. |
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Re: scared
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by Solmyr1404 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:27:24 AM AEST
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wow....uh....you know him better than that....you know he does love you, you're just trying to deny it because the fact he does scares you....i've spoke with him....he's scared because he doesn't really understand it himself....he tells me he's scared to love you bu the does....and it can be hard to not be scared at times....but he's not using you at all....and if you feel he is, maybe you should tell him about it....he needs to know, he needs you to tell him, not me....good write, and cheers....
Solmyr Malikando Amerikayou |
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Re: scared
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by JeS_CaRloS on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:52:59 PM AEST
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| this really hit home its exactly how i feel about my lost love |
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Re: scared
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by JeS_CaRloS on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:58:15 PM AEST
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| this really hit home its exactly how i feel about my lost love |
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