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I Can't
Contributed by
Seikjo
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 07:36:07 PM in AEST
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I can't do this.
I just cant, no matter what i do i cant.
Never can i escape this fate.
I can't run away.
I have to face this tragic future.
Must you still ask me to go with you?
I have to listen to my heart and go with this fate of mine.
I have to acompilsh my destiney.
When i go i can be in peace.
I'll have a paradise just for me.
I'll have something that you don't have.
Today i cant leave, but tomorrow maybe i can.
Copyright ©
Seikjo
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2004-08-21 19:36:07]
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Re: I Can't
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by waos on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 08:42:40 PM AEST
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| i know how that is, the last line is something that seems to be a large part of my life. good write. |
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Re: I Can't
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 08:49:08 PM AEST
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This is great...I wrote something that has to do with fate too...its called Fate By The Day...
please comment on my work too
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Re: I Can't
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:08:40 AM AEST
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Very good poem! But don't give up, who else would I have to talk to about the men in white suits, you're the only one that understands! Good write! ;]
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Re: I Can't
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by Whisper on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:36:54 AM AEST
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This write kinda struck a note with me. A Almost double meaning in between those lines.
Nice write
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