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Dead Buildings
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:14:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Dead Buildings sit
Masking spirits
Dancing in shadows.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
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2004-08-21 18:14:24]
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Re: Dead Buildings
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:33:46 PM AEST
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Geez....I know I'm gonna get cussed out here..but how about something like this--->
Dead buildings sit here
Masking spirits all alone
Dancing in shadows.
5-7-5 ain't all that hard....
Jenni |
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Re: Dead Buildings
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 07:11:04 PM AEST
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| This is NOT a haiku, no matter how often you call it that. The rule is, 5-7-5 and even for you cannot be changed. It is a short poem, ONLY. |
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Re: Dead Buildings
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 04:15:11 PM AEST
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Rules, schmooles...
Who gives a **** anymore.
It's a DeadRecky Haiku, and that's why it's
too cool.
--Mothy |
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Re: Dead Buildings
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:33:58 PM AEST
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| i agree with jenni and rita. great concept though. |
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Re: Dead Buildings
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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lol. uptight girls, they be livin' in an uptight world . . .
I like this, even though its got a weird structure. |
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