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Waiting
Contributed by
SlimStaple
on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 05:50:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Waiting
On a bench with peeling
Green paint
Is where he sits
Every day
Waiting.
Long ago the bus stopped
Making that stop
But every day
He sits there
Waiting.
People gawk
And jeer
everyday
As he
Waits
Though many say that
The bus will never come
Waiting is pointless
They say.
But he still
Waits
Every day
He Waits.
He knows,
Deep in his heart,
That the bus will
One day come.
Until that day,
He will wait.
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SlimStaple
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Re: Waiting
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:37:20 PM AEST
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Interesting write...well done.... can picture him sitting there...
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Re: Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 07:06:00 PM AEST
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At least he had faith. That is more than most people have.
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Re: Waiting
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by Alina on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 08:10:04 PM AEST
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| How is this insperational?? |
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Re: Waiting
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:13:24 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenny and Rita, I like this a lot. I can see how this is inspirational, you just have to look past the literal meaning, I like this a lot. Keep writing!
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Re: Waiting
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by Archie on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:00:33 AM AEST
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This seems to be symbolic. The bus must stand for something.
Sometimes things aren't as they seem |
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