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Loss
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 05:40:29 PM in AEST
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Today, I lost my Self,
I woke up, I was somebody else,
I am happy to be alive,
even though, i felt like a part of me has died,
The memories of my past,
has gone away, they did not last,
This loss, shattered my dreams,
lost my self identity,
or so it seems,
I know im different, things has changed,
I know im different, im not the same,
It would be easy to find someone to blame,
In a new world of pain and despair,
I cant help but say that life isnt fair,
I know i act ungrateful, i know i dont care,
But those memories of my past life just isnt there.
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Jenn2004
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2004-08-21 17:40:29]
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Re: Loss
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:10:07 PM AEST
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Awww Jenn..I am so sorry to hear that.... I am glad tho, that you are here now and able to write about it.....
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Jenni |
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Re: Loss
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by pixie on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:46:29 AM AEST
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wow, this must have been very frightening for you *hugs* as Jenni K said, it is good that you now can write about it,
good write, thanks for sharing,
pixie xx |
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Re: Loss
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by venkat on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:46:33 AM AEST
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| Though its a bit sad..well written..well expressed of your mind.. God bless you. venkat |
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Re: Loss
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 06:45:56 AM AEST
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Sorry for your accident and loss of memory, but glad you are alive to tell us all about it in poetic form.
I hope the future is good for you
steve |
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Re: Loss
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by Whisper on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:40:47 AM AEST
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I was taken by your Title of this write. Loss
and as I read further I was sadden by your lost oh so recently it seems. Hoping your strengths are behind you and your memeries of coming todays make the void more easier to bear.
God Bless
Moe |
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Re: Loss
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:22:58 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni.
sometimes a person needs to loose some memories.
I can only imagene how u felt when u wrote this.
Awesome writing!
luv, huggs, thanks,
emy |
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