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My first and last drink of you
Contributed by
sid_the_tampon_fairy
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 05:32:41 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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At one point I drank you
I drank you in everyday
I needed and I loved you
So why didn't you stay?
You got it in you head
Inside you left me dead
You knew the consequince
I had no evidence
But it was your concience
That gave you away
So this 1's crap to...huh
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sid_the_tampon_fairy
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2004-08-21 17:32:41]
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Re: My first and last drink of you
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 05:36:13 PM AEST
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Not crap as far as I can read... It makes a lot of sense to me.......
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Re: My first and last drink of you
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:40:44 PM AEST
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| this touches pretty close to home. I liked it much. |
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Re: My first and last drink of you
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:55:34 PM AEST
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| very good... I like. :) |
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Re: My first and last drink of you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:00:36 AM AEST
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good poetry! love your user name as well.
wildejohnny.
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Re: My first and last drink of you
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by FiggySue on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 03:01:01 AM AEST
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| I love it. I felt it, Great job. |
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Re: My first and last drink of you
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by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:17:25 PM AEST
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Jess.. i wish you'd stop putting your poems down...it's a talent i know you can do these...and this one i can relate to with you know who.....so stop it this one is crazy wicked awesome....so very "buttery" for a poem..now you know that's a compliment
love ya
blessed be
sirena |
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