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~pain~
Contributed by
sid_the_tampon_fairy
on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:50:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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The razors on the floor
It's bloody like before
It'll always be your fault
My pain will never stop
You always say you love me
Always kiss goodnight
and when you went to hug me
You hold was always right
Now I see the real you was bundled up inside
Whenever I came around you always ran to hide
I see rite through your game
You'll never play the same
The joke ends up on you
Cause you got dog doo on your shoe!
Ok, ok, crappy rite? Couldn''t think of an ending...owell
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2004-08-21 16:50:58]
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Re: ~pain~
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by garyh on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:45:01 PM AEST
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| Haha... yeah weird ending ;) Also you have some mistakes.. at least I think they are :| like "you hold was always right" maybe should be "your hold was always right" or tight maybe... :| |
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Re: ~pain~
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by Sirena_Degana on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:44:18 PM AEST
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omg! that ending is so you!!!! so good girl
blessed be
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