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Thoughts on the Grand Scale
Contributed by
norm
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:16:12 AM in AEST
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The sun and the moon and the stars,
Have little to do with our Mars,
Except that they all
Resemble a ball
and none seem to have corner bars.
Now Venus and Saturn in June
All seem to be plumb in attune,
And you'll find out in space,
That there is no cute face..
Except maybe the man in the moon.
Now, I do not wish to be terse,
You must sit with a drink you can nurse,
And I think you will find
That it boggles the mind,
When you think of the universe.
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norm
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Re: Thoughts on the Grand Scale
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:24:09 AM AEST
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I know the awe of which you speak
although I haven't had a drink in a week
When you look in the sky
and marvel at why
the stars back at us would peek
Stitch |
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Re: Thoughts on the Grand Scale
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:34:42 PM AEST
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| good write =] |
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Re: Thoughts on the Grand Scale
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 10:07:45 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! Norm.....this is just spendid!!!
Roses at your feet!
Considering there are 70Sextillion stars or more, as man can't see them all........you shine brightest here on earth......for this triple limerick!!!
Loved it
hahahahaha! You always make me laugh, but also make me think!
Love
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Re: Thoughts on the Grand Scale
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 03:59:33 PM AEST
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I just loved this, Norm...it's beautifuuly written....
*As she sips a vodka and orange juice*
Jenni |
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