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Is this the one?
Contributed by
reilt
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:02:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Is this the one
Where I say
To hell with it all?
Where I leave behind my reasons
In indelible ink
And allow my body to disintegrate slowly,
Ashes to ashes
Against a bruised evening sky?
Angels are screaming inside my mind
With my voice.
Is this the one
Where I fade?
Where i let it all go
And turn out the light?
Going...Going...
Goodbye
Gone.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-08-21 09:02:03]
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Re: Is this the one?
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:21:56 AM AEST
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I could actually feel my eyes lighting up and widening as I read this. Awesome. You are on a roll, girl.
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Re: Is this the one?
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 11:29:28 AM AEST
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wow!
very powerful!
i'll proberly be a hypocrite to say this but, oh, what the heck!
i hope you don't feel this way, but i certainly
know your feelings...
your poetry is awesome!
don't put your beautiful talent to waste!
my favourite bit was where you put...
And allow my body to disintegrate slowly,
Ashes to ashes
Against a bruised evening sky?
it's really good!
keep it up!!!
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