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GOODBYE TO DAD
Contributed by
the_route
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 08:51:23 AM in AEST
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As we pay our respects to this man we all love,
Remember he’s still with us as he looks down from above.
Remember the good times, every hour , every minute,
No matter what happened his love had no limit.
I look back at my life, and I’m proud to say,
I`ve loved every minute , every hour , every day.
We all share in the feelings of pain and heart-ache,
Hoping it will lesson every day when we wake.
It`s time to weep , it`s time to cry,
The day has come , as we say good-bye.
You may not be here , but we are never apart,
As you`ve taken up residence , deep down in my heart.
I LOVE YOU DAD FOREVER AND ALWAYS
YOUR LOVING DAUGHTER
.DAWN.
D.M.ALLUM
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Re: GOODBYE TO DAD
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by Kie on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 10:07:51 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful, memorial tribute to your dad and I believe he would be proud of you.
At my father's service I wrote a poem on the fliers they hand out and I gave a eulogy.
I found this to be beautiful and it touched my heart.
I am truly sorry for your loss.
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Re: GOODBYE TO DAD
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by inoc on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 10:14:24 AM AEST
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your dad sounds like a loving caring man
I respect your poem and think you did marvously to write it then getting the courage to read it!
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Re: GOODBYE TO DAD
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 11:51:36 AM AEST
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A very touching write emotionally...some technical concerns but all in all a heart wrenching write that speaks of an offspring's love of a father... with a very nicely inspirational ending...I like it.
It brings to mind why I started to write furiously....for now reading this I suddenly remember...the real reason I began to actively write poetry was when I lost my father and could not find a way to cry nor say how or why... sighs....thank you for that...for I have long forgotten...what a window poetry is to our hearts...our souls and our emotions.....thank you for this...memory.
Once again a rather nice write! |
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Re: GOODBYE TO DAD
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by Aika on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:24:52 PM AEST
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Really lovely tribute. I lost my dad too, so know how it hurts.
HE is and will always be with you, truth:-)
with love, aika:-) |
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Re: GOODBYE TO DAD
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by Whisper on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:43:48 AM AEST
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Excellent write. I pray you can still feel him there with you.
Peace
Whisper |
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