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EYES
Contributed by
the_route
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 08:30:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There`s a world in my eyes,
That reveals my whole life.
Each waking moment
Each sleeping night.
They tell a tale of story`s past,
They tell a poem that will forever last.
They show my emotions, my love, my hate,
But they hide my future, my destiny, my fate.
No-one can tell me were my life will go,
That is the one thing only i can know.
My future is hidden, look deep into my eyes,
Your destiny`s not written, that`s for you to decide.
D.M.ALLUM
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2004-08-21 08:30:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: EYES
(User Rating: 1 ) by jeannoh on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:39:58 AM AEST (User
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What a good poem
It flows well
I love your use of words
short but very clear
I liked it....good read
Jeannoh |
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