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The Problem With You All
Contributed by
all4him
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:03:17 AM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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You dont understand how strong i feel
and why it is i wont give up.
You say you do. Yet really you dont.
You say get over him,move on, theres better.
Yet he's the one who makes me happy
When you make me sad.
He's the one who i can go to
And have to hold me close.
You all put him down
And act like he is bad.
Grow up, no one is perfect
Not even you!
You tell me to tell you how i feel
Yet when i do you dont hear me
All you hear is what you want to.
Cuz of that we have a problem
And I wont give up just because you tell me to.
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all4him
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2004-08-21 02:03:17]
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Re: The Problem With You All
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by Bruce on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:44:16 AM AEST
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| excellant write and you said it as it must be, sorry to say |
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Re: The Problem With You All
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:51:47 AM AEST
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what a powerful piece!
awesome!
if you believe strongly in your heart and soul that he's "the one" then go for it, let nothing else hold you back! |
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