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Siren's Whim
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:54:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel the pull
like some siren's
call upon the sea
unable to see
her........
but I can feel her......
I know she's there
calling for me
she wants me
needs me......
she cannot exist
without me....
she's calling
louder
and louder......
for sanity's lost
her grip
and
she's afraid
of being
alone
and misery loves
her company so
if she's patient.....
I'll be there soon......
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2004-08-20 23:54:23]
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Re: Siren's Whim
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 12:15:02 AM AEST
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I'M JUST SO GLAD TO HAVE YOU BACK!!!
Have to get used to the idea.....how long has it been.......never mind......that doesn't count now.
Your lovely mysterious writes take me everywhere and sometimes no where at all!
I really like this one Jaymee......however I can't relate to it all!
Matters not.......you know.......and that's all that matters!
Jaymee Rules!
P:oetic hugs and love
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Re: Siren's Whim
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 12:27:22 AM AEST
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this is a great write...excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: Siren's Whim
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by Spike on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:29:34 AM AEST
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I hear the call too, or is it just my own longing reflected out and back, like a sonar echo? enough about me - another svelte but intoxicating poem.
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