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Dissolving Passengers
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:45:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take your HIV infected a**e
To the nearest train of dissolving passengers
Sudden spasms throughout the arm
Concealing what was ment to be done
My comrade don't ya see
What is strutting infront of you?
It could drag ya away
Even possess your flattering fists
My comrade, stop grumbling!
Look into your shadow...
Confront it and be pleased to end it
Carry it in you luggage
Onto the train above your spinning head
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
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2004-08-20 22:45:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dissolving Passengers
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:05:21 PM AEST (User
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A ggood short but still effective write..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Dissolving Passengers
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 04:03:59 AM AEST (User
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Very unique writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Dissolving Passengers
(User Rating: 1 ) by Luinil on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 07:03:30 PM AEST (User
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very dark and powerful words* |
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