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Depression
Contributed by
Jenn2004
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:53:17 PM in AEST
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Depression is like Cancer, it's tearing me up inside,
Can't get away from it, I know i can't hide,
Take too many pills to ease the pain,
Dont know if i'll ever be the same,
I try so hard to make it go away,
It always pops up any day,
This battle of depression never ends,
When will my chance to be happy ever begin,
This kind of Cancer, dont know if ill survive,
It makes u feel dead, instead of alive,
I stay in my own world that i live in,
Just want to be alone, dont want to be around my friends,
I hate feeling this way, i hate feeling sad,
The things i go through, makes me so mad,
This depression is tearing me apart,
it kills my soul, it rips my heart,
It eats into my brain,
it drives me insane,
Makes me lose my mind,
I'm so far behind,
There was so many things i wanted to do,
Depression stops me from being motivated too,
This depression makes me sick in the head,
Sometimes i wonder if im better off dead.
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Re: Depression
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:00:30 PM AEST
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Welcome Jenn...Glad to see you decided to post.....
I loved this poem....and of late I can relate... but have not reached to the point of being better off dead.. Hope this isn't this way with you.... It was great meeting you..
Jenni |
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Re: Depression
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:55:07 PM AEST
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| amazing write. i hope you find some type of chemotherapy for your cancer. =] i havent found any for my depression either. |
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Re: Depression
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by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:05:34 PM AEST
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i can relate to this poem all too well...awesome write...great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Depression
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:29:22 PM AEST
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Depression is a real mind killer,its like a seething flame, lingering and burning at last dregs of emotional sanity.
I still feel it now and then, but I fight it, because death isnt any better. I write ,draw what ever it takes to keep it at bay, All I can say is you need some one to talk to im here, most days, and some nights, as it is all you talented poets that keep me motivated.
Please take care always,
Kindragon |
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Re: Depression
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 08:19:36 PM AEST
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Awhhhh Jenn... it is hard sometimes, I know. But the bad times are temporary and the good times that come after are worth it. So worth it. Keep looking forward and keep writing - it does help. No matter how bad the storm, the sun eventually shows itself again.
Thanks for sharing this.... and again, WELCOME to YPDC! *hug*
Wishing you sunshine,
SNM |
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Re: Depression
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:19:27 AM AEST
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I know the feelings but meds keep me sane.
This a very heart wrenching write but joy cometh in the morning!
Hang tuff and keep up the awesome writing.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy
U r in my prayers so keep the faith. |
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Re: Depression
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 01:02:09 PM AEST
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Ok another apluse please to the wonderful write by Jenn.. Amazing make the readers feel what you are trying to say.. Its amazing I LOVE "This depression makes me sick in the head,
Sometimes i wonder if im better off dead". PLEASE PLEASE People don't ever let this happen to you.. Because depression can kill and make your life miserable noone should ever go through it.. People come and go in you're life but no one should ever ruin you''re life.. See it as it comes never take it right away you choose to let it in or just walk away and brush you're shoulder off and keep going living life... People should understand we only live once.!!!!
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