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Left to Fade
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:46:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Left to Fade
Wandering along the path
Slowly losing my life
As I try to find
And gain back time
I lost it traveling this path
Through the darkness of life
The sands of time
Takes a second of life
And I begin to find
All I missed in life
What I can't gain back
Whenever I try
The darkness of time
Brightened by memories
That transpired through life
No longer able to be seen
As they fade into the distance
To a place never to be revisited
Again by me and I'm left frayed
For ever being alive to this day
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Essentially9
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2004-08-20 19:46:45]
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Re: Left to Fade
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by cheech on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:59:55 PM AEST
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yo yo yo what up G?listen up that was a very wonderful write and very interesting,keep up the wonderful work,
ur pal
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Re: Left to Fade
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by waos on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:04:51 PM AEST
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| ya, was good, nice job |
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Re: Left to Fade
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:05:39 PM AEST
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!
sigh....never again to be revisited.... except in my dreams......
Jenni |
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Re: Left to Fade
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by savedbydeath on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:19:23 PM AEST
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SWEET *ss poem,this was so cool,u do such a great job on writing material that reaches down into our souls and we can see something we could never see before,awsome write keep up the great work
later ur home girl
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Re: Left to Fade
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:39:51 PM AEST
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Interesting write.... obviously, a reflecting back on past times. It could, I think, be interpreted as sad... but I find some positive in it as there is awareness and insight embedded here. I enjoyed this... it got my mind turning....
Hoping that I've interpreted this correctly as a closing of a door to the past in order to move forward,
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Re: Left to Fade
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by Archie on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:14:29 AM AEST
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| I understand how you feel and I wish sometimes that there were some roads I never traveled and sone things i never knew |
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