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untitled
Contributed by
spider
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:01:25 PM in AEST
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This message which passes without leave……
The unsaid in the said, the undone in the done
What you say and what you mean
Are two completely different things
The theory of reality
And the reality in theory are often…
Confused
Some say my heart died first
My body is all that’s left to die
But whether u killed me partially,
Or completely
I feel so far from myself
and will continue to...
Until you are……
With your twisted words
Twisted meaning, twisted heart
So far away from me…
You no longer hold place
In my heart
or bitter memories
Copyright ©
spider
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2004-08-20 19:01:25]
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Re: untitled
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:27:33 PM AEST
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| very good. maybe you can do a rewrite if you want and explain more if you wish. you could create a title that fits the greatness of this piece. =] |
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Re: untitled
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:02:16 PM AEST
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i think its pretty good
most people don't say what they mean...they mix it all up...
I like it, and can relate to it on different levels
please comment on my work too
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