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HEAVY HEART SMILES
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:30:55 PM in AEST
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"HEAVY HEART SMILES!"
I love my dear Linda Lady,
"I can't cut your hair anymore," she stated boldly!
My heart fell clear to my extremities,
My heavy heart suddenly burdened with crises!
My heart exclaims, "Oh, Please God, No!"
But I reply, "Linda are you all right?"
My heart replies, "You are my hero!"
Bold courageous, accepting cancerous fight!
"It's spreading , Connie, in my bones!"
My heavy heart hears and bemoans.....
My heart says, "This shouldn't be happening!"
I say to her, "I'm sorry--with much caring!"
My heavy heart says, "Is that all you can think
to say? How trite!"
"I wish dear Linda, I could help!" my voice kept bright!
My hearts says, "You're so young,dear.
My life I've lived, I'd gladly do this for you, I'm sincere!"
Words we never speak, out of fear.....
So afraid we might say something to hurt--unkind appear?
From the same school we graduated.
Cutting my hair, so many years I never counted!
My lady Linda's life sadly lived.
With all her heart she tried, little happiness retrieved
With heavy heart, I could assist from her home to move.....
Being cheerful, helpless, her burden I can't remove!
Standing on the sidelines as her grief passes by.
Frozen in place, should I let her see me cry?
Would that be so wrong?
She would know then just how much I cared.....
Before she dies!!!
My heavy heart shared or spared?
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
August 20, 2004
"So many times in my life
I've felt complete helplessness,
emptiness, returning all I have to give.......
Love!"
*Heavy Heart Smiles!*
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2004-08-20 18:30:55]
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by emystar on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:40:55 PM AEST
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Mom this is beautifull in its sadness it's a masterpeice. U r so full with luv and compassion the ozzes in your writing. I'm so proud to call u Mom.
tell her to keep the faith as there's always hope as long as there's brethe in our bodies.
give her a big hugg form me.
I will put here-n-family in my pryers.
Luv huggs, prayer, fith, hope, joy, peace,
yo brat,
emy |
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:00:28 PM AEST
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I have watched friends die of cancer...and my brother...it is so hard...I know what you are feeling
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by Archie on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:38:52 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome write, and you are right grief will pass in a little while. |
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:47:24 PM AEST
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This is such a ravaging disease. All we can do it love them and give them support for as long as we possibly can. Life is not fair, but life does go on. I have experienced it first hand several times and love is all you can give.
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:15:44 PM AEST
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Connie, I believe that you should let her know how helpless you feel and how pained you are for her ... I think you should take to her a copy of this wonderful, heart wrenching poem. Your words, your heart, your thoughts are all right there. It is a beautiful piece of art. Dedicate it to her in life, in person, as opposed to the alternative. Just a thought from a young pup that don't know when to shut up.
A truly beautiful poem.
Nazmythian ~
" Scott " |
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by waos on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:19:50 PM AEST
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| My grandparents have died of cancer, it's so hard to know what to say. *hug* |
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:24:20 PM AEST
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| strength to you ConSue. I think you are a person whose heart always shines through. |
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:12:50 PM AEST
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this is so heart felt...i know what it is liek to watch a loved one die from cancer...my best friend since i was born her mother had cancer....and her mother was like a second mother to me...she died whn i was only 10...i miss her dearly....i hope ur friend makes it through this.....great write....awesome job
Lots of Love
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by jaeann on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:28:26 PM AEST
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| so very heartfelt.......if your heart could speak my friend......the words would be etched in gold........... |
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by pixie on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 12:10:31 PM AEST
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a very, very moving poem, my heart goes out to you Consue,
hugs,
pixie xx |
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by Aika on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:38:13 PM AEST
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My dear Connie Mom, yes, if only hearts could speak...... absolutely true. I wish it was possible.
You are in difficult situation, yet, our hearts speak without our knowing - that is what I believe.
With all my love, aika baby:-) |
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Re: HEAVY HEART SMILES
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by Stitch on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:15:05 PM AEST
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Oh, Consue! How very sad. I have lost several friends and relatives to this insidious disease now. I feel for you.
Stitch |
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by critterhideaway on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:06:33 AM AEST
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| How sad this is. But you should give a copy of this to your dear friend, letting her know how you feel and being there to comfort as much as you can is what to do. Faithful friend to the end with no regrets. |
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