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Swim Eternally in Sadness
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:30:34 PM in AEST
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I swim through roses of deceit,
waiting for the sun to come,
to blind all the sorrow away.
Grab on to crumbling hopes,
the only thing left to sustain me.
I can smell the tragedy,
stinging my every breath.
I'm always pretending and lying,
it's ripping me to rags.
My mind is held together with nothing but
strings of other's happiness,
now I can mirror it and project my own.
It shines through my eyes,
that no longer see the silver lining.
Just the gray dominates my being,
as swim eternally.
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2004-08-20 18:30:34]
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Re: Swim Eternally in Sadness
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by artostuff on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:17:42 AM AEST
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| Hey, this is good. I like the imagery and feeling. |
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Re: Swim Eternally in Sadness
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 03:06:12 PM AEST
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| I liked this one much better then a few others I have read of yours..You have a talent you jUST need to let it loose in a more harsher way..I think this poem worked due to the way you put it all down..Very well written. |
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