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IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:28:00 PM in AEST
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This night I shall dream of your love a beautiful rose
Once again, this night an orchestra you compose
In my dreams we fly on the exquisite robe of love,
Skimming vast continents of divines soaring up above
Waters shall never separate us shine on variable star
Waves like small breasted angels greeting us from afar.
We shall feast on love and tenderness kisses in the rain
Adorned in white silk, bubbles float seeping in champagne
I shall hold your love against my breast as sure as eagles fly
Like a thunderbolt in the night soaring so high in a sun lit sky
In the heat of the night each breath i feel intoxicating lust
Your a devil in disguise a thorn in my side.. turns to angel dust
Copyright ©
sweetangeluk
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2004-08-20 18:28:00]
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:47:53 PM AEST
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This is truly beautiful... great imagery!!
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 07:26:59 PM AEST
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Wow! This is a beatifull write. If we didn't have our dreams at times we'd be lost.
great work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by Archie on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 02:09:11 PM AEST
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| You are good! I am very impressed with this poem. Great write! |
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 11:58:21 AM AEST
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Now see you put me in the mood here..Thank you hun
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:17:35 PM AEST
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sexy and very good images 2 this hun..
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by bernard on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:31:56 PM AEST
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| Dream on my dear, May your dreams come true. A most beautiful write. Thank you hugs bernard. |
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:12:01 PM AEST
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Wowie zowie, this was awesome. I didn't expect you to carry the quality of the first stanza thruout, but you did. A beautiful poem.
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by bernard on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:59:27 AM AEST
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| what an adorable poem. I enjoyed my read immenslyy bernard. |
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 10:19:56 AM AEST
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mmm mmm....for a sweet angel you sure wrote a devilishly sensuous poem. ( feels the heat ) I loved it
Roses at your feet for this one
Larry |
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:06:33 PM AEST
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Very beautifully written.
great write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:23:53 PM AEST
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oooo... pretty, sensuous and all round wonderful poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 01:56:06 PM AEST
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| This is a great write, your metaphors are very good. |
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 06:55:56 AM AEST
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wow! this is good tight poetry! well done.
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:37:15 AM AEST
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Great piece, strongly crafted images........what more can I say.
Well done
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by valentine on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:29:54 PM AEST
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This is magnificent . . the first stanza ; "This night I shall dream of your love, a beautiful rose" invites me gently in to the utopian love you explore, refusing to let me go until the last line . . so tender and fragile. . heart-warming and beautiful. "I shall hold your love against my breast as sure as eagles fly
Like a thunderbolt in the night soaring so high in a sun lit sky" . . this is exquisite . . like a precious gift I must keep close.
~*~ Valentine ~*~
.... Rose |
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by Kie on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:54:42 AM AEST
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Elegant and exquisite to the senses.
Gorgeous.
High praise for this one..
Kie ( Who loved the ending) |
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:41:13 PM AEST
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....Simply PERFECT! More words when they come, and are suitable to submit! Such beautiful words you weave, cheri ange! Speak to us, your devoted audience, once more of this love! Lots of love and many blessings! I will return to leave a better/longer praise!
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:41:12 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful peice of writting powerful in it's emotions, they seem 2 just reach out and gently get in your face . . .
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Re: IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 03:00:24 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write. I loved this very much. The ending was absolutely perfect. Much love.
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