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my illness
Contributed by
rebelshorty0418
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 05:01:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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my illness
i try to hide my illness
i try to hide my pain
but i live with it everyday
u dont understand and u never will
the pain in my heart
the pain that i feel
"u wont walk past 30 "
says the doc
i just rub my neck and look at the clock
its no tellin what time has in store
but whatever it is ill walk straight thru that door
nothin can hold me back from my dreams
even tho thats the way it seems
pain is life for me
and even tho u cant see
i will make it thru to walk another day
cause this is my life and im here to stay
theres one person in my life that truely cares
she was always there and i was always in her prayers
ill make her proud of me if its the last thing i do
she's the only reason i walk today she's the only reason i made it thru
so who is this person that i speak of
this wonderful person is my mom who i owe all my love
~ Mom, I love u so much. U have always been right by my side thru everythin i owe my life to u and everythin i got in it. And one day i will make u the happiest mom in the world i dunno how but i will because i owe it to u. I just want to u know ur the greatest person ill ever know and i hope one day to be half the woman u r.~
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Re: my illness
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by emystar on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:25:56 PM AEST
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very good writinga nd welcome to our global family here. I luv your positive attitude and this write really shows what a grand mom u have.
Many times in my life I'vee faced death straite on and God gave me the choice to keep fighting to live our give up. Your attirude really says a lot about u.
Keep writing as we need much more poaitive attitudes on planet Earth.
a masterpeice of luv u bring to the reader.
Luv, huggs, smiles, faith, hope, peace, joy,
emy |
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Re: my illness
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:31:42 PM AEST
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A warm welcome to YPDC..the site where fellow poets care....
This is a very touching write...and such a great dedication to your mom.. I love your positive attitude.. I hope some of it rubs off on me..
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Re: my illness
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:34:44 PM AEST
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I'm sure you do make her proud, not only with your inner strength but also in the way that you show it by the words you have written here.
Good write
steve |
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Re: my illness
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:23:05 PM AEST
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A great first post, with a fantastic subject. Welcome to YPDC and keep that attitude positive !!
Nazmythian ~ |
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