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Self Mutilation
Contributed by
Alina
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 01:58:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I get pist and angry and hurt inside
So I go to a place where I can sit and hide
I sit there and think
" Why the **** am I here ?"
I look around and no one to love is near
I feel lost and numb
And cold from inside out
I sit there and wait
Then get up and linger about
I walk in a daze
Up and down the streets
My life is so foggy
And full of haze
So I put on my music
With loud screaming words
And I feel the addrenaline
Through my bodies curves
I sit back and lock myself in a place no
One else will see
And I listen to the hateful words
Which describe the inner aching me
I look around, I find a razor or blade
And I get the impression
I feel like " I cut, I'm saved"
So I sit there and cut
I watch the blood ooze and drip
But **** this world
And everyone in it
**** if, that's it
I'm through with this ***
Copyright ©
Alina
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2004-08-20 13:58:34]
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Re: Self Mutilation
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 02:20:51 PM AEST
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You done well posting something about your past, But it is better out in the open then still buried deep within, where it does the most harm. Ive been where you were, and although you cant undo the past, you have made the right step into making yourself a better future.
Awesome write, and a well done poem.
Take care always
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Re: Self Mutilation
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by lonely_kakashi on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 02:23:39 PM AEST
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Despite the fact you are not proud of this poem, its very good and describes how you felt very well...well done
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Re: Self Mutilation
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by Katie2008 on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:17:31 AM AEST
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This poem is very powerful. I think you're very brave.
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Re: Self Mutilation
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by Inevitable on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 09:44:34 AM AEST
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You must be only a year older than me.
Sad write,
although you are not proud
you cannot escape what made you who you are.
You must burn the past, to emerge amongst the ashes....a phoenix |
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