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Jean & Candies Vitamin E

Contributed by Alina on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 01:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Jean & Candies perfect world, a pill supply at ease
Where we all will stay
Of pink clouds and purple seas
Living... Dieing.... Not wanting to see another day.

Jean has always been so smooth
And Candie sweet like green apple
A place of love and evil free
Yellow, Pink and Blue trees
A place to dance forever.

With a sign over their village
That only us druggies could see
A free 24 hour grab
Of dolphins, fairies, our precious Vitamin E.

A sense of grace lies around our secret
But no soul lays within
Vitamin E, our Ecstasy
Leaves us wearing thin.

Taking us from our soul
Leaving our mind polluted
Talking to our falling brain
Our innocence defruited.

In this village our minds would slip
As it turned into dust
Go chasing, racing, a place to sit
And float away so high

A place of everlasting dreams
Drugs and Sex and hopeless schemes
A place of my life at thirteen
Jean & Candies Vitamin E.

Copyright © Alina ... [ 2004-08-20 13:34:13]
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Re: Jean & Candies Vitamin E (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 07:09:16 PM AEST
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wow girl this poem is awesome. i could see everything you described, great imagery. always a priviledge.
lovelovelove, Brynna

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