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I'm Already Dead
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:34:56 AM in AEST
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It’s too late I’m already dead,
My mind is no longer inside my head,
It has disappeared without a trace,
All that’s left is a big empty space.
My borrowed time just ran out,
I have fallen down death’s spout,
Earth is no longer my home,
In sweet death I won’t be alone.
Death is not something to fear,
As your time draws oh so near,
Extend your arms & hold death’s hand,
As it lead’s you into another land.
I died a long, long time ago,
I wasn’t loved so who would know?
Alone I’d felt for quite some time,
I don’t think my little star ever held a shine.
I do quite like being deceased,
As in death I have at last found peace,
Something that I had always craved,
My soul was one that couldn’t be saved.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-08-20 08:34:56]
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Re: I'm Already Dead
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:45:34 AM AEST
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strong write but as long as you live you can be saved...you hold that light within...i know this from personal experience...also death is not the end...you would carry this through eternity...i have seen your light and it shines bright still
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Re: I'm Already Dead
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by inoc on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:55:15 AM AEST
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I LIKE THIS WRITE
I HOPE YOU ARE ALRIGHT
I BELIEVE YOU WILL BE FINE
IF YOU KEEP WRITING SO WELL
................. IN RHYME
I thought I'd also review in rhyme
I hope you don't mind...
cheers! |
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Re: I'm Already Dead
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by amber1988 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:14:24 AM AEST
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| i like ur poem. i hope everything worked out for you. i relate to ur poem in the way that i used to b depressed and didnt think anything could change it to make it better and i wished i was dead. but it did get better. |
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Re: I'm Already Dead
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:43:08 AM AEST
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Oh hunni, i'm so sorry you are hurting.
I am always, always here for you.
Anytime, MSN, PM anything. k?
There comes a time when we die inside, but things can always get better.
All my love,
Phil xxx |
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Re: I'm Already Dead
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:15:12 AM AEST
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as ever, your poetry is excellent pixie!
but, don't let this depression live on you. you're better than that, you really are!
all of us on here know you better that, you've just got to except it now.
i'm here if you wanna talk!
PM me. |
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Re: I'm Already Dead
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:11:46 AM AEST
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Awww Sweetie.....things will get better...hold on to that hope.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: I'm Already Dead
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by lonely_kakashi on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 02:42:16 PM AEST
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You once commented on caring, now its my time to return the favour, dont give up on life!
Stick 2 fingers up at it and say "no, im not gonna do what you want me to do!" :-)
We all feel 'pants' at times but dont give up things always change.
Hey could always try to be a blind optimist like me, happy most of the time until you relise your being an idiot! lol
Anyway care Pixie,
Kakashi |
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Re: I'm Already Dead
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:16:33 PM AEST
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Death is never answer sweet Pixie! From death you never come back! You may have peace and lots of it......but that's all you'll have....so think very carefully when you reach for death's hand! You'll never return to the living land!
Go get help.....maybe you need medication!
Love you
consue |
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Re: I'm Already Dead
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by venkat on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 05:21:35 AM AEST
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| Though sad..it is a strong write. venkat |
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