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Coart Inside My Peers Dugs Probelms...

Contributed by deathdrop on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:00:29 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



if you can't fall into the right slots,
then all you'll do, is crash down and drop!
that's what i found,
when i went round.
it's just the rule,
when you go to a broken school.

full of bullies, and druggys, and those who carry knives,
full of foul-mouths and *****, who stir to cause the fights.
you have to find your group, or you'll be all alone,
and you can't face that, since they'll break your cone.
until your emotionally naked, crying out in the play ground,
but often in the dark corners, where you pray to not be found.
but when you are, then they like to chase,
telling you to turn round, or you'll get hit in the face!

so you turn round...
and they come straight up to you.
they once pushed your mate down,
right in front of you!
but there's nothing you can do!

so you're alone.
so you sit in the library break and lunch,
on your own.
scared, you'll get punched,
if you leave there,
go out,
'coz they're ALWAYS about.
there's no one nice.
no one kind.
.... and the teachers make it worse,
they just screw up your life.

so it takes you a year,
to get some decent mates.
but who are they really?
why are you their mate?
some are druggy's,
most of them really,
only, hear and there,
and not too heavy.

it's only when it's out of school,
and you meet, your mates, mates.
there's the biggest problem!
and it controls all your fate.
so you're slipping down hard,
sliding down under pressure!
but you mustn't say a word!
or else, they'll get cha!
that's the rule!
always, has been in school.
always has been for me,
that's why,
i some times,
want to die,
you see?
this is my life.
it's why i used to cut.
but now i've quit,
but life is still, just too much!
but still i gotta face it,
each and every day,
... but i'll finish this here,
i've nothing more to say...!

so IF you ***** from mental health,
decide to read this.
just know i'll get punched or "done in",
if you don't shut your lips...





Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-08-20 06:00:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Coart Inside My Peers Dugs Probelms... (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:06:20 AM AEST
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great write. Very powerful

dizza


Re: Coart Inside My Peers Dugs Probelms... (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:17:43 AM AEST
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I love your writing...I feel your work so much, they are more than just words they are a feeling. Welldone... dont look back welldone on stopping the cutting.. i wish i could say the same.
Love always
corrupted_minds


Re: Coart Inside My Peers Dugs Probelms... (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:18:35 AM AEST
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I'm proud of you for not cutting, stay strong. It's ashame you have to go to a school like that.....Great piece.
Katie




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