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Dad... Why'd You Leave?
Contributed by
oreo_kisses
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 04:15:45 AM in AEST
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Why did you leave me?
I know I was so young
But I needed a fatherly figure in my life
I didn’t need to deal
With such a tragedy
At the age of four
Ever since you
Mom has tried
To find another guy
But none can compare
Even though lots have tried
Only one has succeeded
In mom’s eye’s
But none will ever
Compare in mine
You will always be
My one and only dad!
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2004-08-20 04:15:45]
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Re: Dad... Why'd You Leave?
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by Archie on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 04:25:30 AM AEST
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| I lost my dad at 17, that was in 1985 even today it remains to be the greatest tragedy that I have expirienced. |
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Re: Dad... Why'd You Leave?
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by Katie2008 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:13:08 AM AEST
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This is so sad! I am so sorry for you, if you ever need me, I'm here.
Katie |
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Re: Dad... Why'd You Leave?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 01:44:53 PM AEST
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Being Adopted I never knew who my real dad was, but in way what you feel is the same.
Beautifully written and fro mthe heart which makes it all the more dear.
Take care always
Kindragon |
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Re: Dad... Why'd You Leave?
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by BOZEEN on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 03:39:30 PM AEST
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| IT WAS DECENT. |
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