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Abused
Contributed by
Miss_Erika
on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 02:52:58 AM in AEST
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All I can hear
is you yelling and screaming.
You'll never know
exactly how im feeling.
the pain across my face
the darkness around my eye
I want to leave this place
but it's hard to say good-bye.
I just dont understand how a parent
that says they "love you"
can look into your eyes
know that your scared
...and still hit you.
beatin and bruised
torn and abused
it just doesn't make sense
im so confused.
someday all this madness will come to a hault
someday I'll quit thinking
that it was all my fault.
Copyright ©
Miss_Erika
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2004-08-20 02:52:58]
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Re: Abused
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 03:01:32 AM AEST
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| IT IS NOT YOUR FAULT. did you know you are a child of God. He knew you before you were physically created. He loves and will always love you no matter what. plus you now have your friends at YPDC |
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Re: Abused
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by XPoeticChicX on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 03:05:25 AM AEST
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| Hey.....I just got out of a pretty bad time myself...it explains it all in my poem called, "fall" in the angry section.....about abuse. You're definitely not alone! |
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Re: Abused
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:59:55 AM AEST
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oh such a painful poem!
it wasn't your fault!
pin that into your head now, so that they can't hurt you in that way any more. |
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Re: Abused
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by UnfallenTears on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:42:19 AM AEST
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| Amazing poem. One that really forces you to feel something and it takes a great writer to do that |
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Re: Abused
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by Ms_superior on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 10:43:02 AM AEST
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| This was a great poem. Your situation is a lot similar to mines. I wrote my mother a mother's day poem entitled " When I'm Gone". It's posted on here. You should check it out |
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Re: Abused
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:47:17 PM AEST
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Not an easy poem to write I'm sure.
You handled it well..........good work
steve |
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Re: Abused
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by screwup on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 04:01:58 PM AEST
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| you are gonna be okay... I have been abused in every way a person can be abused...I've attempted suicide too many times to count... save yourself this trouble and learn now that you did not deserve this...and it is NOT your fault. |
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Re: Abused
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by Queentzie on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 02:57:54 PM AEST
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I like this poem because I can relate to it so well.
Nice work.
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