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I Will Live Life
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 02:49:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Watching these jet planes yawning miles across the sky
Transcends the feeling of loneliness,
These combustible colors race past
Screaming into the atmosphere.
Flowers wilt, and people pass.
The sun will rise only to burn out.
The wind will come and go
At will, who are you to stop it.
Field mice will do what they do,
And then they will die.
It is inevitable, Death.
Looming over us,
Like a geat zepplin.
Waiting to crash into your life,
Waiting to burn its way into your heart.
But for now I will forget all that.
I will watch the leaves dance to an invisible rhythm.
I will listen to the hum of water falling over rocks.
I will live life.
I will.
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deadreckoning1983
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2004-08-20 02:49:43]
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Re: I Will Live Life
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 03:17:07 AM AEST
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This is really interesting...The imagery is good... I like it a lot.....
Jenni |
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Re: I Will Live Life
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:47:04 PM AEST
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I liked this, it had a load of imagery in it...and you expressed yourself well...I enjoyed this since you dont have a whole long list Ill read your others lol...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: I Will Live Life
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 08:08:03 PM AEST
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| Ok I absolutely love this! I'd have to say I'm thinking this is my favorite poem I've read of yours. The imagery and way in which you connect it to life is astounding. At first it seems as though the poem will have a depressing ending, but then you twist it with a sense of determination and hope. I mean wow! Great job!!! |
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Re: I Will Live Life
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 05:15:49 AM AEST
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They look very modest, these poems.
And he has a gentle cadence,
at least in my mind:
I hear the maturity of Burroughs
or Bukowski...
but the words are distinctly Dane beam.
He has poetic vision, and a gift for expressing himself in a way that is only Dane Beam.
These were worth seeking one last look,
to come back and find something I vaguely remember as inspired... and inspiring.
--Ghost Moth
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