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With the Heart in Hand
Contributed by
Oldernotwiser
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:57:07 PM in AEST
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oops
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Could you play
this game
forever? Forgetting
that you started
and finished both
with me forever
trying to learn
the rules spinning
over poker faces,
never my strong suite
but yours always, waiting
for your call, waiting
for me to fold.
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Re: With the Heart in Hand
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by pvd on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 09:19:15 PM AEST
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I like it strong and to the point. Playing poker great metaphor.
PVD
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Re: With the Heart in Hand
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:44:40 PM AEST
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As usual, I could feel this with my very being. So much in so few words. Are the rules for love and combat much different? I think not.
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