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Inside of Me
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:56:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Inside of Me
Walking away
With the pain
Inside of me
Locking away
What I don't want seen
The mistakes made
The things said
I'm at this point again
Looking at what could have been
When I turned away from it
Walking away from then
My life I'm trying to mend
Trying to transcend
What I feel within
Walking away
From then
Can't runaway
From what's within
Locking away
My feelings
It's the end
I couldn't transcend
What's within
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Re: Inside of Me
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:02:57 PM AEST
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this is a good poem.
it lets alot out, well that's what i gathered from reading, you may feel different, but i'm not sure.
thanks for your comments on mine... i like to know what people really think, and when they don't comment i get so frustrated, so i'll comment on all your poems which haven't been commented on and tell you what i think.
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Re: Inside of Me
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 07:55:27 PM AEST
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good job on this 1 here..I really liked it
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Re: Inside of Me
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:33:27 PM AEST
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you did very good on this poem..i commend you also..thanks 4 sharing..
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Re: Inside of Me
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:53:21 PM AEST
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This is what I'm doing right now in my life...locking my feelings in...wow this hit me...damn exactly what I'm doing...trying to learn to how to control my feelings and hide them too...but they will resurface...they always do...
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