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Out to You
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:33:37 PM in AEST
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A wounded soul
A crying heart
You're sick inside
All torn apart.
Silent, though
Your sorrow be
You're hiding, running
Fearfully.
You need a friend
To mirror your pain
So that your hurt
Is not in vain.
I'll cry with you
I'll hurt with you
Be crushed, be mad
Be strong for you.
Open up
Please, start to cope
You need a friend
You need to hope.
You love the Lord
As He loves you
Learn from this pain
He's given you.
Here is my love
My sympathy too.
You have my heart---
For it goes out to you.
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eatfresh22
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Re: Out to You
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by ps_ihateyou on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:43:46 PM AEST
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| i really liked this. very well written..and i can relate to it... |
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Re: Out to You
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by liquidsunshine on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:06:38 PM AEST
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Not only is this poem beautifully structured with wonderful rhythm, the writer proves to be a very good friend. Aren't we all glad to have Carrie in our lives?
Love you, girl.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Out to You
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 06:52:27 PM AEST
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Very moving. I hope he gets the message with this.
And yes Chelsea, Carrie is a blessing to know.
Slàn
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Re: Out to You
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:51:18 PM AEST
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Dude! I love her! YEs Carrie, we all do.... I really like this one, especially...
I'll cry with you
I'll hurt with you
Be crushed, be mad
Be strong for you.
It's pretty... like you! Ok, enough of that cheesy stuff. Happy, Em?
Well, take care, Carrie.
David
P.S. Sorry... seems like I wrote more to other people on this than I did to you.
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Re: Out to You
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:19:47 PM AEST
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Great poem Carriebearie... it is very much a Davidic writing (not King David, but David Lossing) I think he is influencing you in that area. Just don't lapse into his love poem patterns... *gag*
Em |
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