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The Poet Within
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:24:15 PM in AEST
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SILENT!
An unborn passion
Undisturbed, sensitive
Drowning in beauty
Struggling to live.
NOTICED!
Beginning to feel,
To think, to be
Subtle and gentle
Arising powerfully.
AWAKENED!
Life seeps out
Gasping for words
Thoughts undying
Ideas to be heard.
ESCAPE!
Pen......paper
Ink flows free
My heart condensed to liquid
For the entire world to see.
Copyright ©
eatfresh22
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Re: The Poet Within
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:50:10 PM AEST
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Carrie...
I LOVE IT!
I LOVE IT!
So well expressed... and written... very powerfully stated...
Keep up the good work...
~Donna~ |
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Re: The Poet Within
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by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:40:56 PM AEST
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I agree with the above comment, I love this. I feel the same way. Great writing!
Katie |
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by ps_ihateyou on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:56:11 PM AEST
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| i agree with the other two comments..i loved this! |
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Re: The Poet Within
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 06:49:46 PM AEST
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As when you read it to me, I think this is a fine piece. Perhaps italics would be better than caps though, for the initial words?
Enough criticisms here, though. Keep up the very excellent work.
Agent Lossing |
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Re: The Poet Within
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:46:35 PM AEST
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I agree with the above comments! They do like it. I agree with them. But this comment isn't about them, it's about you.
Your heart condensed to liquid/For the entire world to see
If it's your heart that comes out eac time you write, it's a beautiful thing. 'Course I knew that already. Shut it Andrew.
I love you Carrie, take care.
David |
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Re: The Poet Within
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:15:51 PM AEST
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Hey Carriebearie, nice commentary on the writing process... this is very much how I do it myself
Em |
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Re: The Poet Within
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:17:28 PM AEST
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Well done! I'm a fool for metapoetry so you had me by the title and the note at the top. But... you exceeded my expectations with this piece!
What a great tribute to poetry - a most worthy subject!
Well done,
SNM |
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Re: The Poet Within
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by thewordzwithin on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 12:56:29 PM AEST
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| Great! Simply incredible! What can I say that hasn't already been said? You have a great gift and it is very good to see and read someone who shares the passion of expression so deeply and vividly in their heart. God Bless you... and my real name is Darnell Brown and I am the author of “City Limits”, a poetry book that I’ve written (go to www.citylimitsthebook.com to check out my site, there’s a place where poets can get their work posted exclusively on their own page and maybe dedicate it to someone) One of the reasons I posted this message is to let you know that I’m starting a magazine called “When The Pen Hits The Pad” and it’s going to be a place where artists, by that I mean more than just poets but writers, scriptwriters, painters, photographers etc. where they can have their work out there for people to see and possibly put them with people who can help them get to where they want to go. If you are interested in being a part of our first issue, send me and email to thewordzwithin@yahoo.com and tell me what you think and what you want to summit Tell all your friends who might be interested and keep up the good work!!!!!!! |
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