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Forevermore destroyed by Love
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 04:00:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I open up my heart again,
And let the emotions in.
This love that shrouds all else,
This profound passion...
This desire that engulfs my soul,
Makes me tremble...
Vivid images of you and I, together at last...
Wrapped in an eternal embrace,
A bond in which no one can break...
A kiss, so sweet, that tears can only express my fervent pleasure...
An angel's caress,
Feather-like and blissful...
You, my celestial seraph, my incessant love...
Dearest Cupid,
Your bow has struck me once again...
I only fear that this happiness will end like the last...
With me all alone, in the dark pits of my fevered mind...
Wallowing in a perpetual sea of my misery and sorrow...
Shedding tears,
Remembering of a love I once had...
But as of now,
I have this everlasting love,
And someone that will accept me for me,
And not for an image that someone else has created...
I wish to bask in it,
This once in a lifetime offer...
Of course, I may find another if this does end...
But never will the next relationship be as passionate or as beautiful as the one before...
Love is filled with splendor and bliss,
But soon enough,
Pain and anguish take over...
Smothering that brilliant light that we created together...
The touch of your flesh, no longer evoking the same feelings as before...
Your kiss, not making me feel like I’m falling....
Lost forever,
Two souls drifting apart...
Only the moon, that precious moon lighting our way...
Let it never end, this, what we have together...
If you leave me in the darkness, near Their suffocating grasp,
May I build a thick wall surrounding my battered heart...
Letting no one in,
Shutting the light out...
So I may never go through the pains of lost love again...
So I won't make the same mistake once more...
I am done with love.
No more.
Stop making me feel these uncontrollable emotions towards you,
You, who will forever be an enigma to me...
I loved you so much,
Why did you do this to me, when you knew I went through this before?
You promised me it wouldn't end like this...
But, like always, I’m the naive one.
The love-struck teen that will never solve the mysteries of love...
The blinded angel who is there to receive nothing but anguish...
Agony disguised as love...
My glass heart has been broken for the last time...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2004-08-19 16:00:08]
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Re: Forevermore destroyed by Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 04:31:32 PM AEST
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That's what love does alot of times...it hurts.
Nice write, a little long but it was worth the read to me.
angel always...joni |
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Re: Forevermore destroyed by Love
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:17:20 PM AEST
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Depressing and all too realistic. You depicted both your pleasure and pain from love in a very poetic way. I hope that you can learn to forgive and to trust again. For without the opportunity of love, your heart will suffer more than it should. The fear of suffering is often times worse than the suffering itself. I hope your broken heart does heal. Emotional, good piece.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Forevermore destroyed by Love
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by Hakiokusaken on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:05:32 PM AEST
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very good you are talented. you show plenty of emotion. worrth the long read.
~HAKIOKUSAKEN~ |
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Re: Forevermore destroyed by Love
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:38:45 AM AEST
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I could sit and read your words, hear your heart, and gaze into your mind all day long. You have a true gift of expression. I envy your ability to portray your emotions so succinctly. I have been captivated by everything you have written ... you seem to be able to reach into your reader, or at least me, and never fail to grab hold of a heartstring. And the direction pulled is seldom the same. You write life stories that are relatable to all, and you almost seem to defy your reader to deny that they understand. Vous êtes vraiment doué.
Nazmythian ~ |
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