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°°°Soulmate To Late°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm sitting here watching, your love fade away
Why are you blinded, Please look my way
I'm silent when you speak her name
You are my echo, i am your flame
I wish i had your sweet sugar kiss
Why can't you see , it's you i miss
I'm quiet to your words of pain
I'm a different girl, whisper my name
I long for the day that you'll be mine
I've searched for you, such a long time
I've cried my tears for your battered soul
Don't let your fear cause you to let go
Please hear my words, don't be a fool
Don't live in regret, and let hatred rule
Our words they fit in perfect rhyme
I need your song, i need your time
These passions that i keep patting down
Protected by a wall of frowns
Why did you run away from me
In my arms, is where your supposed to be
But i'll be quiet here, wearing my mask
I know what i want, is to much to ask
i'll hide in silence, i'll hesitate
Your now my soulmate, a day to late
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-02 06:35:00]
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by stephy on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:36:53 AM AEST
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| very nice write... how sad though.. in some ways i can relate from things in my past. |
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 07:28:34 AM AEST
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Very good. I can totally relate to this. I have felt that way at least once before.
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by orgygirl on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:22:20 AM AEST
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This is such a beautiful poem- I can completely relate to. You are very talented and show much potential as a writer. I'm thankful that you posted. Take care
R. |
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by MisterRight on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 09:11:41 AM AEST
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This is probably one of the saddest things I've ever read }:^(>
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by Poetic_Angel on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 11:45:24 AM AEST
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| good poem. i like its flow and the vibe tha ti'm catching. keep up the good work! |
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 01:24:47 PM AEST
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| Great poem ... I can relate to these words - especially "your now my soulmate, a day too late" ... so true ... |
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by Nazaholic on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 08:02:54 AM AEST
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| Reading this made me cry i can relate to this one all to well,going through a similar situation now. great write love this one. |
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by BigMike on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 04:52:00 AM AEST
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| Really great write. I can relate to this also. keep on writing, your really tallented. |
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by Smooth on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 04:27:25 PM AEST
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| soulmates, kindred spirits, love at first sight ... the romantics dictionary of passionate kisses. We always miss it when it's gone, the grass is never really greener is it? I am sure he refers to you as the one he let get away. Thanks for sharing this one, I really enjoyed it. |
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:55:02 PM AEST
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| i liked this one alot. makes a guy want to hold you and make you feel special. ahh, the beauty of the internet. annonimity! :) |
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by BabyLuby on
Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 04:35:29 PM AEST
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thank u for ur comments on my poems thought id look u up and see wot uve done and i must say u have an amazing talent dont let it go to waste! well done
Hannah |
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Re: °°°Soulmate To Late°°°
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:55:16 AM AEST
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Yes this is beautiful, only know you need not look for ur soul mate live your life do whats right, go to school, and let your true Love come to you and respect you for who you are!
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