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Never Fade Never Go Away
Contributed by
all4him
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 02:12:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Thoughts of you and me that day
Never fade, never go away.
I lay up in this bed tonight
Everything clear to my sight.
For tomorrow will be the same
This is no game
The thoughts of you and me today
Never fade, never go away
Even with another by my side
Without you life will be a lonely stride.
The thoughts of you and me today
Never fade, never go away.
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Re: Never Fade Never Go Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gabriel on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 02:25:32 PM AEST (User
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great read....i think you might be sacraficing some of your vision in order to rhyme though...you might want to revise the 3rd and 4th lines of the second paragraph...but i really liked the idea behind the words |
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