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What Did Your Birth Mother Give To You?
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:36:48 AM in AEST
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What did your birth Mother give you?
Mine’s dead but she can still put me through,
Years of negative thoughts & self torment,
Leaving in my mental health such a dent.
I was given the gift of eternal pain,
She’s with me like a thorn in my brain,
Telling me that suicide is my only way out,
Puts my wanting to live under severe doubt.
She wants to see me lay in an early grave,
I am a damaged soul that no-one can save,
Fated to die on my own, a lonely death,
Letting suicide steal my very last breath.
I have been left here on earth to rot,
To slip under insanity & lose the plot,
All the while I can hear her haunting laugh,
In my tortured serotonin she takes a bath.
Me, the daughter grown in a diseased womb,
You took my soul & onto the floor you strewn,
I was conceived in sheer & utter hate,
You'll surely be the sealer of my already doomed fate.
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pixie
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Re: What Did Your Birth Mother Give To You?
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:00:47 AM AEST
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Great write, but I hope this is mostly fictional.... (Well I can always hope, can't I??
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by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:27:09 AM AEST
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Wonderful write. But please don't give up just yet. You can always start over, you don't have to be like your mother, show her who's the better person. Best of luck.
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:27:33 AM AEST
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*hugs you lots*
Oh hunni...i hope this is fictional too...
Such a powerful angry write.
If you need to talk you know where to find me.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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by darkplaidbabe on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:52:00 AM AEST
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oh i agree with the others i hope this is fictional but either way i know how you feel. such a sad situation but neverhteless a beautiful poem. you might take a look at my poem "life with a murderer" sort of similar. anyway if you ever need to talk, im here.
lovelovelovelove, Brynna |
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:19:26 AM AEST
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Sometimes poems can leave you utterly speechless.
This one certainly did just that.
A soul tormented definitely in this
steve |
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Re: What Did Your Birth Mother Give To You?
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by richcol7522 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:24:49 AM AEST
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| There are quite a few poems that leave you at a loss of words and yours did just that. It prints a very vivid picture in your mind.. very good write keep it up. |
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Re: What Did Your Birth Mother Give To You?
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 02:27:39 PM AEST
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Things can be turned around Pixie it does not have to be this way
Yes you can destroy what happiness you feel for what.
Yes there is help you just have to reach out and ask for it. Turn your life around now hard as it may seem... it is not once you allow all negitivity to leave
A powerful deep emotional poem very well written
Good luck
Lots of love Sweetangelukxxxxx
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Re: What Did Your Birth Mother Give To You?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:26:00 PM AEST
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It is your choice as to who wins this contest. Seems like that is what this is. Either you can let her defeat you for the rest of your life, and ruin forever for you; or you can turn your heart, back, mind and soul to her and tell her she is gone and cannot hurt you. She never could if you honestly think about it. Why do you choose to keep letting her? I hope this is fiction too, but it doesn't feel like it is.
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:52:32 PM AEST
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A very powerful write. It takes a stronger person than you give yourself credit for to survive.
Hugs Always,
The Voice
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by Gothik_Twitch on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:13:47 PM AEST
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| Its a very powerfull right but it isnt morbid at all. Sad and angry but not morbid. |
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Re: What Did Your Birth Mother Give To You?
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 07:14:02 PM AEST
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Oh Pixie to this one I can certainly relate!
I had to live with a very sick abusive mother, for all the days of my young life. I could chose which way I wanted to be......I decided not to pick up where she left off! She dead now, but even while abusing me and telling me she wished I die.......I stayed happily filled with joy! And still do.
It's your choice dear.....it's all up to you! Want to be happy,,,,, or sad......it's your trick.....which will it it be!
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:40:48 PM AEST
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| carry on fighting matey youre doing great. excellent writing as always love hxxxxxxx |
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