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The Reaper's Stream
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:28:55 AM in AEST
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I long to float in the reaper’s stream,
Let him finally enter into my dreams,
Allow him to take over my pure soul,
Take out my heart & place it in a bowl.
Then set me afloat in his dark water,
Make me his beloved daughter,
Hold me deep in his evil heart,
I silently watch him as he tears me apart.
His love can not be mistaken,
I adore as his powers fully awaken,
Breathe in as he pulls me close,
Feeling the force of his ghost.
I moan as his blackened fingernails,
Pierce my spine as I lay impaled,
I am now his powerless sex slave,
After he’s finished he’ll throw me in my grave.
My body lays all motionless & still,
Ready for the vultures to devour at will,
This is still my only dream,
Longing to float in the reaper’s stream.
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by bernard on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:45:42 AM AEST
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| Pixie you seem to have a slight touch of depression. I shuddered as I read your poem.The poem is good and deserves the 5/5 that I have given it. I hope that your next poem is more positive. Keep smiling from bernard. |
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:59:32 AM AEST
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um pixie...don't give up.
and don't you dare do anything stupid.
many years ago I had similar feelings, someone dear to me told something, they said that God gave us our life as a gift, as something to help us learn , grow, enjoy and experience. Whether or not you are religious the basic advise still stands. Life is to prescious to throw away, once you do, its gone. We all have highs and lows in our lives, its easy to get through the highs, not so for the lows.
Hang in there and don't quit, things may not get better right away, they may even get worse, but I'll bet they do eventually get better.
BTW, subject matter aside, your write is very well done! You have talent, take some solace in that.
Phil |
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by Kie on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:03:36 AM AEST
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Writing can be very therepeutic Pixie. You write from your inner most soul. Be it happy, depressing, angry or forlorn you pen from the soul. That talent is not something most people are blessed with. Writing can touch a person's life & heart so much more than conversation with the most complex words.
Don't give up Pixie even when the reaper's stream calls to you. Think to the road up ahead.
I see alot in you, I always have.
Kie |
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:05:49 AM AEST
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| I love that you are so honest in your work - i imagine it proves itself the best therapy. Thanks for sharing yourself so that perhaps others can be similarly soothed |
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:06:53 AM AEST
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This is so powerful. It's definitely one of your best. I hope you're doing better now, but I'm very impressed with the depth of this work.
Stitch |
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:11:58 AM AEST
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This is one of the darkest things I've read. Apart from Cancer's horrifying writes, I think you've reached a level all on your own. I am sorry you have to write such things . . . but I imagine the power they convey can carry some measure of darkness from you, and have it shared with the reader.
Hoping this has relieved you somewhat . . . |
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:07:52 AM AEST
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Wow! I never thought of it as the reaper streaming, but you portrayed all the angst of the dark force that takes hold of us. This is very well done and expressed in truth! I sure hope you feel the Light that also pulls at us too. It can be a stronger force than anything the reaper offers! 0:-)
Angel always...joni
p.s. Be well my friend! |
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by darkplaidbabe on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:04:15 AM AEST
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whoooooooooooaaa.i feel unworthy to be on the same site as you. this is so dark and so beautifully written. as always a great write!
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:38:26 AM AEST
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I can relate to the feelings you hold at the moment.
I hope you don't "give up", where would we all be without your work to inspire us ?
Look for the stream of life, friendship and people who care :- ).I'll even throw you a bouyancy aid if you like
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 11:33:15 PM AEST
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you have such talent...i wish i could write as well as you...this is an awesome poem...great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 03:51:41 PM AEST
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Oh hunni, please, please don't give up.
I agree with Neptunes, this is very dark,
But i know things will get better.
And i am ALWAYS here.
Stay strong
Much love,
Phil xxx
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Re: The Reaper's Stream
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:06:06 AM AEST
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| great flow, powerful words indeed. |
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