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Losing
Contributed by
EvaRee
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:15:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Here I am
my walls caving in
a battle of sanity
that i cannot win.
What I an now
because of fate
I wish to change
but it's just too late.
Th power of words
to break you away
from your true self
that was never meant to stay.
I'm a lost child
with no where to turn
noone understands
how my heart yearns.
The blame was put on me
after years of being strong
now everything is back again
no where to belong.
The emptiness I feel
from what i was wrongly done
no one could comprehend
none of this is fun.
My heart is broken
with no tears to cry
all that was left
was no will to try.
Again i am here
in this deep dark hole
with no one to help me
to save my soul.
Copyright ©
EvaRee
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2004-08-19 08:15:30]
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Re: Losing
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by Babigurl on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:22:51 AM AEST
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great poem i totally understand ur situation ..keep writing!
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Re: Losing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:05:22 AM AEST
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There are those that understand...you would be surprised at how many.
Hang in there.
Very nice write. |
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Re: Losing
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:51:54 AM AEST
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you've put your thoughts across very well in this...
keep your chin up,
you're good for some thing. |
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