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Life at various stages

Contributed by venkat on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:31:19 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



As a child
In my dreams I saw angels and goddesses
Dancing gracefully while swaying their heads
Like heavenly trees, with sweet smiling faces
Like flowers gazing at me with lovely glances!
As a young man
The floor on which we danced was spread
with thorns earlier, tears you did shed
but now the spring has made a flowerbed
for us to dance and worship the Cupid.
As a writer
I paid homage to Shakespeare and Kalidasa
Before I have started my career as a dramatist
In Telugu, the most beautiful language of the East
And tried to win the heart of Eternal Muse!
As a yogi
Conversed with many sages of the past
when I saw them in my astral flight
Conversed with many angels of light
when I saw them in the space of my heart
As a man of truth
Understanding of the mysteries of universe
Is not possible till we understand the secret
Of the universal soul which exists as nucleus
Of every atom and the substratum of the world!
As a devotee of God
May the blissful love of God be ours
May the grace of God lie about us,
The friendship of God we have sought,
May God extend our life so that we may live!
* * *
(from my forum “Start with last word”)







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Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:34:50 AM AEST
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Loved this 'auto-biography' of yourself, my friend..It is superbly written..
Jenni


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:14:26 AM AEST
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truly amazing Venkat :)

pixie xx


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:16:42 AM AEST
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It is always fascinating to see what comes out of your forums. Wonderful progression.

Thanks for sharing this.


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:55:37 AM AEST
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There are no words oh Master to praise the literary gems that flow from your golden pen, I am sometimes dissapointed by what I read here at YPDC but then a poem from you and there is hope again for a struggling old man that loves the written word. I salute You bernard.


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:57:15 AM AEST
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I missed the growth of the forum you speak of, but did not miss one step of the man who writes with a feathered pen...fluid and artistically. And yes...the understanding of the substratum is quite a complex task, but joyous nonetheless through any stage of life.
Beautifully penned my friend!
Angel always...Joni 0:-)


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:13:24 AM AEST
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Very impressive!!!
Thank you for sharing this.


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:15:38 AM AEST
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This is incredibly brilliant and a ballet of words that was exquisite to read.

I'm always impressed Venkat.

Kie


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:47:31 AM AEST
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impressive as always a joy to read

Shari


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 02:31:41 AM AEST
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You always seems to amaze me with your writes..It's so beautiful yet refreshing to read..
I like to learn from you how you write sooo well.


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 03:58:46 AM AEST
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This is very good. Sometimes the way to the heart are simple words. You have mastered your art very well.


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 02:28:03 AM AEST
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wonderful..K


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:24:23 AM AEST
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i love how you laid this one out, venkat, the poem itself, very moving on a personal level to me, and to all writers, how could any of us read this and not be touched deeply? whatever your feeding your muses, i see you growing by leaps and bounds, beautifully written:) keep 'em comin, hugs and love, always nessa

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Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:39:55 PM AEST
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Venkat this is very special indeed!
I'm so glad I didn't miss this one, I'd feel I was in need!
How very gracious, how very loving!
Blessings from God all your life.....no wonder you feel so close to the spirits and God!
Exquisite Delight........I really enjoyed every word of it!
Thanking you
Poetic hugs
consue


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:58:25 AM AEST
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I suppose that all of these facets are the reason that you are such a master of the word? I tend to think so. You delight and enlighten me all the time. Thank you.
Thumps ; 0)


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 03:13:46 PM AEST
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Fantastic!...I've hit a point in my life where I've turned to god, and started believing in him...when I was younger I did, but I always had my doubts....when my grandmother died I lost all hope in god and stopped believing...every once in awhile I would go back to faith, but this time I'm actually back and praying...I feel as if I am now connected to him...it feels great!...

please comment on my work too
summer


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:51:43 PM AEST
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You have a beautiful way with words, excellent work once again.

wildejohnny.


Re: Life at various stages (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:52:38 PM AEST
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I am too awed to even venture to comment Venkat Sir.
The floods of gifts you were bestowed with are just too unbelieveable.
Where the great philosophers toil and struggle to find words, propositions, demonstrations, etc. etc. you just fly beyond them like a golden arrow.
Awesome the calling to whom has been given so much!

Blessings
Elizabeth




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