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Finally I say goodnight
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:40:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Call me names that pull me down,
Make me bleed when I'm on the ground,
When you've done enough you do some more,
Push me around and call me a dirty whore,
Abuse me when I'm cold and broken,
Shut me up before I've even spoken,
But little do you know about,
I'm not the type to stand up and shout,
You've hurt me more than you'll ever know,
Hurt me more than I'll ever show,
Each time you hurt me the scars would burn,
But I know one day would be your turn,
I once was beautiful but now I'm cold,
Not even my mother would want to hold,
My feelings they hide like tears in the rain,
When I smile I still feel this pain,
I put on the mask to hide I'm weak,
Hide the hurt that I can't even speak,
Blind by darkness, Blind by sun,
Blind by the cruelness of everyone,
So where is God to save me now,
God throw me a rope, and tell me how,
You aint been here before, ain't been here now,
Just a broken girl, with a heart in two,
To fix this heart no glue will do,
I'm a leaf in the wind, no where to land,
Not old enough to even stand,
To ***** it all, It's worth this,
Not even for another kiss,
Hand me a gun, hide the mirrors glass,
I tried to think this feeling would pass,
And to my head I'd place the gun,
It's now or never, I can't forever run,
Bloody clothes that I wear,
Are for you to proudly share,
Remember you stabbed me deep,
With memories that I still keep,
I hope you cry when you see my skin,
For now I am the one to win,
But in the shadows, in the shade,
I'd sat alone and briefly prayed,
You always wanted me out of sight,
So finally I say goodnight.
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corrupted_minds
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2004-08-19 06:40:55]
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Re: Finally I say goodnight
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:48:55 AM AEST
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I DON'T WANT YOU DEAD!
and i'm sure that no one else on this site does either!
PM me! |
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Re: Finally I say goodnight
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by Babigurl on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:26:10 AM AEST
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| very sad poem |
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Re: Finally I say goodnight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:17:40 AM AEST
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Very powerful, well written.
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Re: Finally I say goodnight
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by yesi on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:43:14 PM AEST
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Cool poem. I know EXACTLY how you're feeling. Just don't do anything drastic to yourself. Take care
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Re: Finally I say goodnight
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 04:28:17 PM AEST
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wow this was amazing....such emotion...its breathe taking....FANTASTIC!!....you have so much talent
Lots of Love
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Re: Finally I say goodnight
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by Hakiokusaken on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:55:06 PM AEST
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You have a lot of talent expessing emotion. You really do have a skill why would you throw something as precious as that away. Hang in there. If you need someone to talk to, im here. PM me if you want to.
you have become a freind to me
~HAKIOKUSAKEN~ |
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Re: Finally I say goodnight
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 03:56:49 AM AEST
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great write. Loved it.
love always, dizza
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