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Try, Try Again
Contributed by
rbps861
on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is a long and bumpy road,
We each have our troubles,
There are many hard roads and some dead ends,
But whenever we're stuck we must try again.
No ones got an easy road,
But when we give up hope,
Nothing good can happen,
So when all seems lost you must try again.
You can't take control and you won't
Overcome loss if you don't try again.
Those who succeed seem to have it made,
But they have been down too,
So when your spirit gets weak and you need
To cry, and you try to be happy but have to
Sigh, when things seem their darkest,
That's the time when you have to shrug it all off
And try, try again.
Copyright ©
rbps861
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2002-11-02 03:30:00]
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Re: Try, Try Again
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by stephy on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 05:25:11 AM AEST
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| how true... we must never give up hope but try again... and again... if we must. nice write. |
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Re: Try, Try Again
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by OreO on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:19:09 AM AEST
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This is so true, we
all must try try again
instead of giving up hope
This has a great message
behind it, i enjoyed reading it
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Try, Try Again
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:20:27 AM AEST
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Lovely write..and good, sound advice...
Jenni
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