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Raindrop Tears
Contributed by
Nikai
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 04:01:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The rain falls
and falls
and falls.
Slowly , sweetly,
it lands on my body.
totally, engulfing my essence
It makes me look up to the blue-gray sky
And I inhale the wonderful sounds of thunder,
the essence of a thunderstorm
and I just close my eyes,
willing myself to breath,
just to breath.
Then to feel
To feel each raindrop fall
Each careless kiss is like a memory,
a sweet pain that I am trying to forget.
It drowns me.
I am consumed in these raindrop tears.
Copyright ©
Nikai
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2004-08-19 04:01:51]
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Re: Raindrop Tears
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 04:11:00 AM AEST
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Fantastic masterpeice!
Fantabulas!
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Raindrop Tears
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 04:55:24 AM AEST
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Beautiful and tender words.
'Each careless kiss is like a memory,
a sweet pain that I am trying to forget.'
Exquisite.
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Re: Raindrop Tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 06:33:45 PM AEST
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i love rain...the way it makes you feel, and think - *sigh*.
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