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Last Time
Contributed by
cj_ranson
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Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 02:55:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I was cheated
I was a game
Now I know exactly who too blame
I don't need you
To help me get through
You were never there anyway
You were never there, especially the day
That I needed you most
Now has come a time
In which my mind is in sublime
Im over it
Im over you
Life goes on
And upon my mind a light has shone
I have chosen the right path
Life can be compromised so fast
And it was never meant to last
So quickly you went
So quickly I came back
Showing everything you lack
I may be wrong
But listen to my song
You were a fraud
You still are
You left me with a scar
You left the world in pain
And you made so many insane
Full of love, but a broken mind
And a love that they would never find
You tricked them
Copyright ©
cj_ranson
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2004-08-19 02:55:29]
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Re: Last Time
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:08:57 AM AEST
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Re: Last Time
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by emystar on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:09:17 AM AEST
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A masterpeice as I know I've been tricked many more times than I would wonna try-n-count.
great writing as u've chosen to stand and walk on! I really like that part 'cause when one goes forward then we havn't or can't be defeated as we choose life.
More please?
luv, huggs, smiles,
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