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Broken Record

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 10:10:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

So I met this guy
Anything but shy
Fed me every line
I never saw the signs
He was a mistreating
Cheating, Girl-friend beating
Piece of white trash

I feel like a broken record
Playing the scene over and over
From when I heard the news
To when I was left
With my heart battered and bruised

Next came the one who was going to save me
But what a heartache he gave me
Him and four friends
Gave me the worst end
Wouldn't let me escape
Another victim of rape
When I could I ran

I feel like a broken record
PLaying the scene over and over
From when I was pulled down
To when I was left
All battered and abused

Then he came to me
Holding the key
To reopen my heart
Before he tore it apart
Like every guy before
But it hurt a little more
Since he left never to come back

I feel like a broken record
Playing the scenes over and over
From when he got high and cheated
To when I was left
Souless and emotionally abused

So when you did the same
I was shocked by your shame
The tears that you cried
When my heart nearly died
And how you felt so bad
Almost made me sad
Sad for you not for me

I feel like a broken record
Playing the scen over and over
From when I met you
To when my brother left you
All battered and bruised

Now I'm not saying I'm not upset
Nor can I claim not to be offset
But I'll tell you this, right now
You made me see, though I don't know how
That some guys do really care
And it came as a small scare
But I'll always be grateful

I feel like a broken record
Playing every relationship in my head
From insincere beginnings
To bitter, cold ends
Leaving my heart feeling used

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2004-08-18 22:10:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Broken Record (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 08:25:15 AM AEST
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Awwww Kie crying here for the terrible things that have happened to you.
Never you settle for second best ever for you deserve a love that will be as giving and as unselfish as you are.
Keep strong Kie thinking of you

Heartbreaking poem superbly written

Massive (((((hugs))))))) for you
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx

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