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Overseas but in my Blood
Contributed by
gina
on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Long time no hear no see
faraway ,we're worlds apart
across the coast ,overseas
still close to me,living in my heart
Flashes of memories invading my thoughts
your jokes,your laughters,the joy you brought
are you returning or are you not!
my heart is captured,my soul is caught
Stuck in those moments,im barried in the past
crying the days that ended so fast
your killing look,the meetings,the touch of your hair
still tingle me badly,do you now care!
still can see you around,still hear your voice...God!!!
with every breath,still can feel you in my blood
Copyright ©
gina
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2002-11-01 22:20:00]
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Re: Overseas but in my Blood
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by OreO on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 10:22:38 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful write
Bravo! I give it a 5
Keep em' coming gina
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Overseas but in my Blood
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 12:14:17 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful write, I have a sister that will be leaving soon, she'll be gone for four years, I know I'm going to miss her badly, |
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Re: Overseas but in my Blood
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by Opium on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 09:51:03 PM AEST
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| Good write Gina keep 'em comming, courage continuez :P |
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