|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I'm Sorry
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:09:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
Take my life
I知 ready to let go
I知 not afraid anymore
Death is all I want to know
I hate my life
I screwed up real bad
Now nothing matters
I知 just way too sad
I値l just slit my wrists
And watch myself die
Watch the crimson fall
Losing tears, as I cry
As I知 slowly dying
I feel the pain slipping away
I just feel so free
What more is there to say
I know I have failed you
So this is how I値l right my wrong
I値l let you stop worrying
So now you can be strong
I just want you to know that I love you
And I知 sorry for being me
I致e made too many mistakes
I知 sorry I知 not who you want me to be
Copyright ﾂｩ
CrimsonTears
... [
2004-08-18 19:09:16]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I'm Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:13:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Good job,,but my advice is give up on the ***** ppl throw at ya... |
|
|
Re: I'm Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 09:06:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
pretty good bro!
everyone screws up...and its hard to forget, or get over...it takes time...the mistakes yea we all got those too...i know how you feel man...i can totaly relate...
please comment on my work too
Summer |
|
|
Re: I'm Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:09:11 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Get thee to a psychiatrist!
...And I’m sorry for being me
I’ve made too many mistakes
I’m sorry I’m not who you want me to be
With self esteem that low, you need professional help.
Take my life
I’m ready to let go
I’m not afraid anymore
Death is all I want to know
I hate my life
I screwed up real bad
Now nothing matters
I’m just way too sad
What did you do to warrant offing yourself?
Tell me you didn't forget to put down the toilet
seat after using the facility? Say it isn't so!
They can be very unforgiving about that one.
I know... you made yourself a sandwich and didn't put
all of the fixin's away just in case you wanted another
one. She discovered this cardinal sin and now you're
ready to walk the long mile.
Or is it the garbage thing? Did you forget to take out the
garbage again? My old boot's pretty good in the winter
if I forget, but she can really get excited if I forget in the
summertime; she's afraid of picking up a bag and touching
any of God's little creatures, i.e. maggots! heh, heh.
Couldn't help pullin' yer ***** after reading one too many
of these, "I'm going to punch my own ticket" poems. *s*
Stoney
|
|
|
Re: I'm Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:13:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I can completly relate to this. Cause thats how i am feeling alot latley, a dissapointment to ppl because im me, and that nothing will help me be happy,.. great write.
-Amber |
|
|
Re: I'm Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 05:13:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i understand you're having a hard time....but dont take your life away or wish to die...life is just to precious...
keep faith |
|
|
Re: I'm Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:38:39 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
love yourself
you are you
be proud
you are a beaut poet
cheers!~
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
