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All Alone
Contributed by
rhei76
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 04:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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leave me here, i am fine, by myself, i will swim the currents
i will tear thru the line and fish in the hollow
turn it around, inside out and breach the shallow
so go on, i am fine, by myself, i will survive
and make it past all the shadows
to turn them out and bring them back
it's okay, i am fine, by myself and in my mind
i'm not sad, i do not hate as i wade thru the wake
to turn it down and what is fake
give you up, just to better appreciate
all the sun of your day
so leave me, i am fine, i will except the end
before the end is mine
turn it in, to better the strife
it's alright, i am fine, all alone
i am fine, by myself
i am
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rhei76
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2004-08-18 16:07:32]
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Re: All Alone
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by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 04:15:30 PM AEST
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I like it. Keep writing.
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Re: All Alone
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 05:13:01 PM AEST
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| Great write, Been there, done that, still am. |
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Re: All Alone
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by yesi on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:09:17 AM AEST
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| Cool write, too maniy I am's though, kinda confused me. But cool either way. |
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Re: All Alone
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by yesi on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:09:24 AM AEST
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| Cool write, too many I am's though, kinda confused me. But cool either way. |
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