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Kill the Light
Contributed by
TwEeK
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 04:04:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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oh why do thy sun mock me
glow down on me so innocent
there is nothing i can do to ridd its evil glare
it will smile down on my pessimistic soul forever
taunting me
haunting me
how do you kill sunlight?
is there a possible way?
if there may
then show me
teach me all you can about killing this hideouse light
and let me bring the world into a lasting forever shade
but i am to dull witted
to comlete this treacherouse task
theres nothing i can do
but smile when the clouds choke off its delicate light
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TwEeK
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2004-08-18 16:04:18]
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Re: Kill the Light
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by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 04:17:15 PM AEST
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lol! I liked this, the idea behind it was very unique. Keep writing.
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Re: Kill the Light
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by Lost_Shadow on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 04:35:15 PM AEST
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I couldn't put it into better words myself. That is exactly how I feel about the sun.
...hmm. Do you know me? Or is it just coincidence?
Excellent write, keep up the good work.
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Re: Kill the Light
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 04:39:31 PM AEST
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Nice write TwEeK !! Be sure to let the madman out once in a while. ( but don't let him take over !!! ) An entertaining read.
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