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Noticed
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:48:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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No one understands me
No one has the time
I'm only what you see
Unless you're prepared to watch the line
Stupid got me noticed
Noticed got me blamed
I'm not that dumb
While you go and give me names
I've watch the cycle
& kissed the moon
I turned it inside out
Just to be with you at noon
Now, no one can feel this
What I must write
No one feels this
No one can believe
Can believe me
But I swear it's true
No one offends me
No one has the time
I'm only what you want
Until you're prepared to see the line
Stupid got me noticed
Norticed got me you
I'm not that dumb
While you call and give me names
I've seen your cycle
& kissed your moon
I've turnd me inside out
Just to be with you at noon
Now, no one understands this
What I must write
No one feels this
What I have to give
No one believes me
But I swear
No one can kill me
Not quite,like I do
You only know me
When you're prepared to watch the line
Stupid got me this far
Noticed got me you
I'm not as stupid
As you think and give me names
I know your cycle
I've licked your womb
& turned myself inside out
Just for your decorated tomb
No one understands me
No one has the time
I'm only what you found
If you're prepared to walk the line
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rhei76
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2004-08-18 15:48:49]
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Re: Noticed
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:56:52 PM AEST
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I liked this.... somehow it brought back some of my youth to me...lol.....(does that make sense?)
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Re: Noticed
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by jessadawn on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 07:07:45 PM AEST
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| I loved this...i feel this way quite often. |
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