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You Took Me Over
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:02:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You sucked me in,
Engulfed my mind
Yo made me think I was real,
Made me want to try
Now you're gone
How can you leave me so stranded?
So lost, alone
Gazing into this pond
I see my reflection
But it is you,
Not me
Why do you haunt me?
Let me be
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iluvpencils
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2004-08-18 15:02:48]
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Re: You Took Me Over
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:21:32 PM AEST
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What u said is so true. The people who u love will always take over your mind at the times when your with them and then haunt your footsteps when thy stop that love.
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Re: You Took Me Over
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:53:44 PM AEST
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It does hurt when someone leaves you and leaves their footprints in your head,which seem to be running around constantly.I felt every verse here,I'm going through something similar.Nice write,
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Re: You Took Me Over
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:45:54 AM AEST
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| Short but so full of feeling. Great write........Mike |
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